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The Writing Sample

August 25, 2009 By Marta Darby 12 Comments

NOTE: Lucy is now in the 11th grade. She has been homeschooled for most of her school life.
She was asked to provide a writing sample for a class she's petitioning to get into.

As someone who stares at blank pages hoping and praying for inspiration to come, I totally enjoyed this.
I think you will, too.

(She wants to be a published author one day….)
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Lucy first day of school

I sit at my desk, staring at the instructions:

λ Please provide a copy of a writing sample.

My hands pull back from the keyboard. A sample of my writing? Does this teacher want an old essay? Or a new piece of fiction? Something short? Long? Informative? Creative? All of the above?

Doubt appears. His seven-inch stature is barely taller than my drinking cup. His little brow is furrowed and his mouth is turned down.

He looks up at me and says, “I don’t think this will work.”

I reply sternly, “I haven’t written anything yet. How can you say it won’t work when there’s nothing here?”

He shifts his weight, and looks askance at me, “Well…” he begins hesitantly, “We just don’t know exactly what she wants… and what if we get it wrong? What if she wants an essay about…I dunno, one of your History assignments? But then again…”

Doubt rambles on, while I try to focus. My fingers rhythmically thump on the keys, and I stare at the screen until my eyes feel glazed. I shut my eyes and focus on the task at hand.

I can do this. Writing sample means a sample… of my writing. I’ll write what I like. It’s easy.

I open my eyes. Doubt is no longer there.

I smile and turn back to the screen.

The blank, empty, plain white screen.

I tilt my head to the side. I blink. I fiddle with my bracelet. I doodle on a notebook. I push my chair away from my desk…

And Procrastination is sitting on my shoulder. Leaning lazily on my neck, he says slowly, “You need a break.”

“No. Not you. Go away.”

I try to brush him off, but my hand falls through him as if it were empty air. He pulls out an apple and begins munching loudly. “How about a snack? You need energy if you wanna finish anything.” He tosses his apple from one hand to the other.

My stomach rumbles. Maybe he’s right…

There’s a loud crunch as he takes another bite. Mouth full, he mumbles, "This project isn’t going anywhere. Just take fifteen minutes. Rest. Relax.”

As he speaks, I imagine myself lounging on the couch, watching a movie. Thinking about nothing. I’m tempted.

Wiping his lips on his sleeve, he tosses the apple into the air. It disappears. “Come on, you know you need a little break. You’ll get this done… eventually.”

I set my jaw. I know all too well how Procrastination works. I’ve fallen under his influence one too many times. I shake my head roughly, take a deep breath, and pull my seat close to the desk again. 

The little being on my shoulder is gone. And now I see a new figure on my desk.

Determination, standing on my stapler, meets my eyes. His face is the very definition of his name. Lips set in a resolute line, he speaks in a steady voice, “You know you can do this. Just keep concentrating.”

As if on cue, Focus appears, sitting cross-legged on my mouse pad. Her breathing is calm and she gazes at the screen, blinking every so often. I mirror her. 

When I do, Inspiration, in all her quirky glory, bounds out from behind my computer. Her wild hair shimmers and her many skirts bustle around her. She adjusts the scarf around her neck and smiles at me.

As soon as she smiles, I have an idea.

With Determination cheering me on every now and then, my fingers relentlessly pound across the keys. With Focus nearby, I never stray from my task.

As I come to the completion of my story, Determination walks off my desk. Focus fades away. Inspiration is the last to leave. She twirls around and is gone in a flash of bright purple light.

I type the last word and lean back in my chair, grinning like an idiot.

Appreciation struts by, reading my work. When he’s done, there is a pause. Then he nods.

“Not bad.”

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  1. class factotum says

    August 25, 2009 at 12:21 am

    Loved it! Did Chocolate provide some Inspiration?I think you have a future in this.

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  2. michelecaridad says

    August 25, 2009 at 12:50 am

    you should turn this in for your writing sample…love the disconnect of yourself even though you are writing about yourself…love the man vs brain approach! author defenitely! published…i will probably be seeing Lucy Darby on top 10 best sellers…great job!

    Reply
  3. Chantel says

    August 25, 2009 at 6:31 am

    Love this. Good advice for all writers here. Am taping it up next to my desk:) Thanks, Lucy.

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  4. Lee Laden says

    August 25, 2009 at 8:05 am

    Brilliant!This is an example of creative writing that will impress any teacher.
    Bravo, Lucy!

    Reply
  5. Kikita says

    August 25, 2009 at 11:16 am

    This was so funny! And so descriptive!I could actually picture all these little people scampering around your desk.
    You’re amazing.
    I’m sure you knew that.
    I love you, Lucy!!

    Reply
  6. Amanda says

    August 25, 2009 at 11:44 am

    That was awesome!Great job, Lucy!

    Reply
  7. Leesa C says

    August 25, 2009 at 5:41 pm

    BRAVO…. Absolutely – MAGNIFICENT, Lucy!!! Keep up the excellent writing! Your Mom and Dad must be so proud! I can see the brillant, shining glitter of the “LucyStar” shooting-up all the way in Aliso Viejo! 😀 Home Schooler’s ROCK!!!

    Reply
  8. Chelsey says

    August 26, 2009 at 3:52 pm

    This is brilliant writing for someone any age, and it’s all the more impressive that you’re in 11th grade. I see a career in your future. Keep writing!

    Reply
  9. Alison says

    August 26, 2009 at 7:49 pm

    I think that’s one of if not the best thing Lucy’s ever written! (Well, that I’ve read of course ;]) Inspired!!

    Reply
  10. Susan says

    August 31, 2009 at 1:08 pm

    Love it! And love the humor of the last line mimicking the … last line! I love that Appreciation has the last word.Have I missed it? Is Amy homeschooling still? What is the class she is petitioning for?

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  11. Marta M. Darby says

    August 31, 2009 at 7:43 pm

    The class was Yearbook and yes, she got in!We are still homeschooling (Lucy, not Amy, who is 26 now and is no longer homeschooled, but that’s not important right now. =D) and she’s in the 11th grade.
    She’s at Pacific Coast High School. http://pchs.k12.ca.us/

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  12. keb says

    September 10, 2009 at 7:09 pm

    totally dig this Luc, reminded me of Hinds Feet on High Places: hannah hunnard would be proud of you. Very well done indeed.keb

    Reply

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